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Eric Korea Memorial

The Last Kiss

Posted on 2007.07.09 at 15:30
Current Location: 75070
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Remember all the good times
When you are feeling sad
Though brief our time together was
Concentrate on what we had

Remember what I stood for
Appreciate my joy
I was there when you most needed me
Never to destroy

I've lived a lifetime of happiness
Everywhere I've been
A lifetime of love, of marriage
A lifetime free of sin

I've watched my children grow
And relished in their youth
I was once like them you know
And tried to keep that truth

In all I've done and all I've seen
My countenance never wavered
Wane not my strength, nor my drive
Life itself I've savored

For all you fools who heed me not
Your hollow souls exposed
No one really likes you
Bile juxtaposed

Shed not a tear for me
My journey continues on
Though I will miss you one and all
Until you've forgotten me...
    Ne'er will I be gone!

Comments:


Tomas Gallucci
schpydurx at 2007-07-09 20:52 (UTC) (Link)
damn dude! Is this like a suicide note or something? WTF?
ehowton
ehowton at 2007-07-09 21:50 (UTC) (Link)
You sir, are retarded.
Tomas Gallucci
schpydurx at 2007-07-09 21:58 (UTC) (Link)
I'm retarded? I'm retarded?!?! What the fuck? You write some stupid shit like:

Shed not a tear for me
My journey continues on
Though I will miss you one and all
Until you've forgotten me...
Ne'er will I be gone!


as if you were leaving your family, dying of a terminal illness or were going to attempt suicide and then you say I'm retarded? Let me take another swing at interpreting this emo poney-tail whiny bitch poem: You wish you had more time to spend with your kids and you whish you were one yourself. However, you think that you can do/be both at the same time because of the increase of psychotropic substances.

You sir, are retarded. Not me!
CeltManX, Devlin O' Coileáin
celtmanx at 2007-07-11 05:46 (UTC) (Link)
UUUUHHHH what!!!!!
CeltManX, Devlin O' Coileáin
celtmanx at 2007-07-11 05:57 (UTC) (Link)
Ya, Ya, Du Bist Ein Dumpfbacke!!!!
Me
photogoot at 2007-07-09 21:13 (UTC) (Link)
I love it! However who the hell are you kidding with the "lifetime free of sin"? Anyone who has ever lived with you knows of your propensity for the occasional bout of debauchery! And I am not judging mind you, I took part in some of that good fun ;-)

That said, it is almost perfect.


ehowton
ehowton at 2007-07-09 21:52 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you liked it. Its a poem, dude; Not necessarily representative of an accurate self-portrait - though I did get close.
Tomas Gallucci
schpydurx at 2007-07-09 22:00 (UTC) (Link)
Not necessarily representative of an accurate self-portrait...
Agreed. You're not a white as the wind-driven despite what you believe. I'm telling you dude, crack kills!
Me
photogoot at 2007-07-10 00:09 (UTC) (Link)
Yes true enough, I looked at its meaning not only in its words but after taking in your words over the phone. So I was primed for what I was about to read by that just as much as actually reading it. That is the second time you got me all spun up to read a post over the phone. The last time was when I got worked up after your phone call to me when I had just landed after a long day of air travel. Remember that one? Exhausted, I got all upset because I thought crowy was actually missing and I was pissed you people were not doing more to find her. That was funny looking back on it. Ha... I get jokes. ;-)
galinda822 at 2007-07-09 22:27 (UTC) (Link)
Beautiful! You are quite the writer.

But somehow this makes me sad.
ehowton
ehowton at 2007-07-09 22:32 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you liked it! Believe me when I tell you it stirred up some complex emotions in me as well.
galinda822 at 2007-07-09 22:53 (UTC) (Link)
Of course I believe you!!!

Aren't all emotions complex?
ex_crowy at 2007-07-10 04:10 (UTC) (Link)
I think the poem is lovely. Since I've been known to write a poem or two in my life, I will not dissect the meaning. Sometimes a poem is just a poem. :)

ehowton
ehowton at 2007-07-10 13:20 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you ma'am. I was aiming for 'lovely.' And yes ma'am, sometimes a poem is just a poem.

Nice to see you back on lj.
CeltManX, Devlin O' Coileáin
celtmanx at 2007-07-11 05:45 (UTC) (Link)
Yes, sometimes a poem is just a poem!!!!
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