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Posted on 2008.10.28 at 11:30
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A glance intent can intone
Across a crowded room
But volumes speak an inflamed touch
Wordless and discreet

Closeness is intoxicating
When desire is in your eyes
Rapturous wanton reflected
Through the portals of your mind

Nuances of sensiferous evocation
Displayed across your face
Nonverbal communication's worth
A thousand words in tomes

True beauty's dreams conveyed
Knowledge of flesh inhaled
Innumerous expression techniques employed
Lifetime of innovative attempts to sate

Touching is a necessity
Ceaselessly demands
The body cries out for comfort
Screaming for release

A lover's breath will never deny
Pleasure's raw fulfillment
Mutual gratification ignored
Tantric as its goal

Low-hanging fruit is just as sweet
Inexorable lust discerns not
Stroke the petal of the flower
The gateway to your soul

Life into that which was inert
I read wonder on your lips
Specular orbs suffocate self
As one we become, then each other

Comments:


Melancthe the Woe, So-Called
melancthe at 2008-10-28 17:12 (UTC) (Link)
You mentioned specular orbs? ;)
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 18:28 (UTC) (Link)
Specular not Spectacular!
irulan_amy at 2008-10-29 16:48 (UTC) (Link)
Close enough. :D
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-29 20:43 (UTC) (Link)
Elephants! Bohemians! Indians and courtesans! Acrobats and juggling bears! Exotic girls! Fire eaters! Muscle men, contortionists, intrigue, danger and romance. Electric lights, machinery - oh, the electricity!
Melanie
vember at 2008-10-28 17:15 (UTC) (Link)
Oooh, that was good. Yours? I'm impressed.

Hits a little too close to home with the long-distance relationship and his visit tomorrow...

Really liked "Lifetime of innovative attempts to sate" among other lines.

Thanks for sharin'
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 18:26 (UTC) (Link)
Why thank you! All of the entries under my 'poem' tag are my own, for better or worse.
irulan_amy at 2008-10-28 17:41 (UTC) (Link)
Wow - beautiful. Nicely done sir!
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 18:22 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you ma'am. So much to convey, so few stanzas.
galinda822 at 2008-10-28 17:50 (UTC) (Link)
Beautiful! I love it!

It's been a while since we had one of your poems.
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 18:21 (UTC) (Link)
Thanks! I was inspired by a rather erotic dream I had last night.
galinda822 at 2008-10-28 18:25 (UTC) (Link)
Your dreams never fail to intrigue! Thanks for sharing.
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 22:43 (UTC) (Link)
Imagine my surprise! I need more dreams along the same lines.
galinda822 at 2008-10-28 23:33 (UTC) (Link)
You're just so eloquent with your choice of words. hehe
catttitude
catttitude at 2008-10-28 21:51 (UTC) (Link)
Huh, can't you just say what you mean. Am I getting lucky tonight or not?
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 22:04 (UTC) (Link)
I may need some alone time with the gateway to your soul. Research for my next poem, you understand. You won't have to say a word.
ex_crowy at 2008-10-28 22:19 (UTC) (Link)
Very nice.
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-28 22:42 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you. If writing heavily-veiled erotic poetry is what it takes to get you commenting, I'll make a mental note to do so more often. Another interesting observation is that all the comments have been from women. I'm flattered.
galinda822 at 2008-10-29 02:05 (UTC) (Link)
Maybe...just maybe because men don't have "petals"? :)
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-29 02:14 (UTC) (Link)
I love a nice blossom in June.
ex_crowy at 2008-11-04 01:09 (UTC) (Link)
My previous try made no sense.

Round TWO:

If thinking I'll only comment when you post erotica makes you post more poetry of this kind, then this is very extremely true.

I also comment when pantslessness is mentioned, it seems.
joey_glover
joey_glover at 2008-10-29 00:46 (UTC) (Link)
pretty awesome, deep too
ehowton
ehowton at 2008-10-29 01:18 (UTC) (Link)
I'm glad you liked it, but you need to concentrate on school right now, not the fairer sex!
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