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Posted on 2012.02.09 at 10:54
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Racing down the rampant path, ramparts shield; berms anti-wrath
Dip dodge duck dive dove; Army foxhole, Navy forecastle
Trench-coat whore fair world war trench warfare
Both Mother Earth's sensationalist development envelopment.


No release without peace, the wooly mammoth's fleece
Kits knit comforting porn flicks imaginative free kicks
Sports and war and sex and war wax and wane lukewarm
Diverse goals divisive poles inconsequential winning holes.


Choose a side go along for the ride don't hide
Stand proud be loud lose yourself in a crowd
Display individualism like everyone else - melt - in pot of smelt
Too rigid too soft re-form reform to others thoughts.


Or instead be yourself, self-hurl from the shelf
Reanimate with utmost haste shed hate procreate
Dance in the street with strangers you meet greet
Know first who you want to be don't flee feel glee
Aim far past the bizarre bazaar its never too far
When you've shed who you are.

Comments:


Michelle1963
michelle1963 at 2012-02-10 02:01 (UTC) (Link)
From the inside of ehowton's busy, busy brain.

This gives me a picture. I wish I could draw.....

Edited at 2012-02-10 02:02 am (UTC)
ehowton
ehowton at 2012-02-17 12:54 (UTC) (Link)
Perhaps you could use words to describe your picture?
pcofwildthings at 2012-02-10 23:51 (UTC) (Link)
Very imaginative and evocative wordplay. My favorite line, for its alliteration: "Sports and war and sex and war wax and wane lukewarm."

Sort of reminds me of a Rolling Stones lyric (Shattered).
ehowton
ehowton at 2012-02-17 12:54 (UTC) (Link)
Thanks. Sometimes I get in a rut. Sometimes I don't.
pcofwildthings at 2012-02-10 23:53 (UTC) (Link)
Holy crap...if you listen to Shattered (http://youtu.be/1BjQYQ5p2Ko) and watch Michelle's Dude dancing, it's totally in synch!
Michelle1963
michelle1963 at 2012-02-12 02:27 (UTC) (Link)
That is SO FUNNY!
Jobu
jobu121 at 2012-02-15 02:03 (UTC) (Link)
whoah it is hahahahaha
ehowton
ehowton at 2012-02-17 12:55 (UTC) (Link)
That's messed up.
Jobu
jobu121 at 2012-02-15 02:04 (UTC) (Link)
Like it sir. Very well written.
ehowton
ehowton at 2012-02-17 12:55 (UTC) (Link)
Thanks dude. Its kinda your mantra too, innit? Well, at least that's how I see you.
Jobu
jobu121 at 2012-02-17 13:37 (UTC) (Link)
You know it sir!
Lelf Treperra
ubet_cha at 2012-02-16 23:02 (UTC) (Link)

I liked it, and amd concernced...

This may be the longest period I have seen you go without jotting something down. Are you sick? On travel or in the middle of a DR exercise?
ehowton
ehowton at 2012-02-17 12:41 (UTC) (Link)

Re: I liked it, and amd concernced...

Gaming. A much better fate!

Edited at 2012-02-17 12:46 pm (UTC)
Codekitten
codekitten at 2012-02-17 12:54 (UTC) (Link)

i love the last two lines...

whew! i was worried too...
ehowton
ehowton at 2012-02-17 12:56 (UTC) (Link)

Re: i love the last two lines...

:)
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