?

Log in

No account? Create an account
Eric Saudi

4404th Composite Wing (Provisional)

Posted on 2006.07.27 at 17:57

Comments:


ehowton
ehowton at 2006-07-29 04:45 (UTC) (Link)
Long-winded denotates wearisomely verbose whereas in this particular effort I dare say was quite the animated prose. My post contained a slight exposition, built suspense through foreshadowing, touched on humor - and even had a hint of sex! It was a very exciting read, and drew real-life conclusions everyone can grasp and appreciate.

You know everything is not an anecdote. You have to discriminate. You choose things that are funny or mildly amusing or interesting. You're a miracle! Your stories have NONE of that. They're not even amusing ACCIDENTALLY! "Honey, I'd like you to meet Del Griffith, he's got some amusing anecodotes for you. Oh and here's a gun so you can blow your brains out. You'll thank me for it." I could tolerate any insurance seminar. For days I could sit there and listen to them go on and on with a big smile on my face. They'd say, "How can you stand it?" I'd say, "'Cause I've been with Del Griffith. I can take ANYTHING." You know what they'd say? They'd say, "I know what you mean. The shower curtain ring guy. Woah." It's like going on a date with a Chatty Cathy doll. I expect you have a little string on your chest, you know, that I pull out and have to snap back. Except I wouldn't pull it out and snap it back - you would. Agh! Agh! Agh! Agh! And by the way, you know, when you're telling these little stories? Here's a good idea - have a POINT. It makes it SO much more interesting for the listener!
Tomas Gallucci
schpydurx at 2006-07-31 07:48 (UTC) (Link)
Hell, even I have a point on occassion!
Previous Entry  Next Entry